Like - the entire thing, okay? I get what you're trying to do here but this is - like, it doesn't read as "Hey I'm Laurie and i did stuff." it totally reads as "Hey I'm Laurie and I'm way older and wiser and better than all of you, listen to me, you are all young and stupid, me me me, it's all about me."
And L, for serious, you know better and I know you aren't like Laurie The Walking Narcissistic but... this isn't great. Like, nobody asked for this, and they for real didn't ask for it as a 5 paragraph essay and you could've done this by saying "Hey. I'm Laurie, who are all of you, lets share."
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Date: 2015-07-09 12:28 am (UTC)And L, for serious, you know better and I know you aren't like Laurie The Walking Narcissistic but... this isn't great. Like, nobody asked for this, and they for real didn't ask for it as a 5 paragraph essay and you could've done this by saying "Hey. I'm Laurie, who are all of you, lets share."